small wording tweaks

Signed-off-by: Andy Piper <[email protected]>

Author: andypiper

data/hosting.ts

@@ -16,17 +16,17 @@ const messages = defineMessages({
   partnersEuBody: {
     id: "hosting.partners.eu.body",
     defaultMessage:
-      "The European Commission runs an official Mastodon instance to broaden public engagement across the fediverse, support European open-source platforms, and provide a privacy-focused channel for official communications.",
+      "The European Commission runs an official Mastodon server to broaden public engagement across the Fediverse, support European open-source platforms, and provide a privacy-focused channel for official communications.",
   },
   partnersSchleswigHolsteinBody: {
     id: "hosting.partners.schleswig-holstein.body",
     defaultMessage:
-      "To strengthen public digital services and local collaboration, the German state of Schleswig-Holstein launched social.schleswig-holstein.de — an official, Mastodon instance open to state administrations, public-sector companies and non-profits in the region.",
+      "To strengthen public digital services and local collaboration, the German state of Schleswig-Holstein launched social.schleswig-holstein.de — an official, Mastodon server open to state administrations, public-sector companies and non-profits in the region.",
   },
   partnersAltStoreBody: {
     id: "hosting.partners.altstore.body",
     defaultMessage:
-      "Altstore is a home for apps that push the boundaries of iOS with no jailbreak required. To support decentralization, user autonomy and privacy, AltStore runs an official Mastodon instance to discuss app sovereignty, alternative app distribution, and open-source solutions outside closed app-store ecosystems.",
+      "AltStore is a home for apps that push the boundaries of iOS with no jailbreak required. An announcement from the AltStore team is coming soon with more details on our partnership.",
   },
   benefitsIdentityTitle: {
     id: "hosting.benefits.identity.title",
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ const messages = defineMessages({
   benefitsHostingBody: {
     id: "hosting.benefits.hosting.body",
     defaultMessage:
-      "Decide exactly where your instance is hosted, in EU, or many other approved jurisdictions - so you meet sovereignty, GDPR, or internal-policy requirements without compromise.",
+      "Decide exactly where your server is hosted, in the EU, or many other approved jurisdictions - so you meet sovereignty, GDPR, or internal policy requirements without compromise.",
   },
   benefitsReachTitle: {
     id: "hosting.benefits.reach.title",
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ const messages = defineMessages({
   benefitsReachBody: {
     id: "hosting.benefits.reach.body",
     defaultMessage:
-      "Define your own server rules and moderation standards. With no third-party or outside platform algorithm. You decide how discourse is moderated and how your messages travel.",
+      "Define your own server rules and moderation standards - with no third-party or outside platform algorithm. You decide how discourse is moderated and how your messages travel.",
   },
   stepDomainTitle: {
     id: "hosting.steps.domain.title",
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ const messages = defineMessages({
   stepSpaceBody: {
     id: "hosting.steps.space.body",
     defaultMessage:
-      "Set the look, feel, and rules to fit your organizational identity. You can add a description, set branding and define relevant server rules for your instance.",
+      "Set the look, feel, and rules to fit your organizational identity. You can add a description, set branding and define relevant rules for your server.",
   },
   stepTeamTitle: {
     id: "hosting.steps.team.title",
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ const messages = defineMessages({
   stepTeamBody: {
     id: "hosting.steps.team.body",
     defaultMessage:
-      "The final step is about sending invites, assign roles if needed, and let community members set up their profiles. You are ready to post, follow, and connect across the Fediverse.",
+      "The final step is about sending invites, assigning roles if needed, and letting community members set up their profiles. You are ready to post, follow, and connect across the Fediverse.",
   },
 })
 

pages/hosting.tsx

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ const messages = defineMessages({
   },
   managedTitle: {
     id: "hosting.services.managed.title",
-    defaultMessage: "All-in-One Managed Instance",
+    defaultMessage: "All-in-One Managed Service",
   },
   managedSubtitle: {
     id: "hosting.services.managed.subtitle",
@@ -40,12 +40,12 @@ const messages = defineMessages({
   },
   singleSubtitle: {
     id: "hosting.services.single.subtitle",
-    defaultMessage: "Designed for organisations that want to stay in control.",
+    defaultMessage: "Designed for organisations that want to stay in control",
   },
   partnersTitle: {
     id: "hosting.partners.title",
     defaultMessage:
-      "Leading organisations and institutions trust Mastodon to manage their instance.",
+      "Leading organisations and institutions trust Mastodon to manage their services",
   },
   benefitsTitle: {
     id: "hosting.benefits.title",
@@ -80,13 +80,13 @@ const HostingPage = () => {
         <h1 className="h2 mb-4">
           <FormattedMessage
             id="hosting.title"
-            defaultMessage="Your fully-managed Mastodon instance"
+            defaultMessage="Your fully-managed Mastodon service"
           />
         </h1>
         <p className="my-4">
           <FormattedMessage
             id="hosting.subtitle"
-            defaultMessage="Your own Mastodon instance hosted by the team who built it"
+            defaultMessage="Your own Mastodon server hosted by the team who built it"
           />
         </p>
         <SalesButton />
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ const HostingPage = () => {
               />
               <FormattedMessage
                 id="hosting.services.managed.who"
-                defaultMessage="Perfect for organisations that want fast access to their own instance with guaranteed compliance and low resource investment."
+                defaultMessage="Perfect for organisations that want fast access to their own Mastodon server with guaranteed compliance and low resource investment."
                 tagName="p"
               />
               <FormattedMessage
@@ -121,17 +121,17 @@ const HostingPage = () => {
             >
               <FormattedMessage
                 id="hosting.services.single.description"
-                defaultMessage="You stay in control. Can can decide which services you want to run yourself and where to get support from Mastodon."
+                defaultMessage="You stay in control. You can decide which services you want to run yourself, and where to get support from Mastodon."
                 tagName="p"
               />
               <FormattedMessage
                 id="hosting.services.single.who"
-                defaultMessage="Ideal for organisations that already have internal resources or want to build internal capabilities"
+                defaultMessage="Ideal for organisations that already have internal resources or want to build internal capabilities."
                 tagName="p"
               />
               <FormattedMessage
                 id="hosting.services.single.details"
-                defaultMessage="Choose one or multiple services from Hosting, Moderation or Support."
+                defaultMessage="Choose one or multiple services from Hosting, Moderation or Support"
                 tagName="p"
               />
             </ServicesCard>